WALT: Identify WTE sentences to improve our writing.
The Simple Sentence: Hornby High school will be moving to the new buildings.
Very Short Sentence: Hornby is moving to Nga Kahui.
The Power Sentence: Hornby moving to the new buildings will give the students a different experience.
Red, White and Blue: Students moving into the new buildings will feel different, weird, and uncomfortable.
The Adverb start: Interestingly, the new buildings will be different.
Begin with a preposition: In, the new buildings students will have new things.
The -ing start: Having the new buildings will be good for the students.
The -ed start: Committed to have a new learning experience.
The Semi-colon: Hornby are getting some new buildings; they will be good
The em-dash: The new Nga Kahui buildings--brilliantly bought--has remained popular throughout the school.
The W-start: With the new buildings almost done we are excited.
Explore the subject: Nga Kahui, the new buildings, are almost done.
Hi Ryley, I like the examples you put for each. It is easy to tell that you're writing about Hornby Highs new buildings.
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